(1)流水句
1) Lack of communication is the most important reasoncaused the generation gap．
应改为：Lack of communication is the most important factorwhich led to the generation gap．
2)For one thing，most of parents too love their children，sothey arrange everything for them．did not considering about whatthe feeling of children．
应改为：For one thing，many parents love heir children somuch that they tend to arrange everything for them．without con-sidefing their feeling．
(2)破句
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