例3 年轻时,他对学习漫不经心,加之,他一直也不愿考虑运动员以外的职业,到这时候,这一切终于给他带来了不幸。(J im Thor2pe ,College English ,Book 4) 。 译文:When he was young ,he was indiffer2ent to his studies ,and he was unwilling to thinkof a non- sport s career. After that , all thesecaught up with him. 受母语的作用,学生译出的这个句子多用简单句,句型单调,结构松散,频频使用动词,通常把能施加动作或有生命的物体作为主语,是典型的“汉式英语”。若改译为:“After that ,hisyouthful indifference to studies and his unwill2ingness to think of a non- sport s career caught upwith him. ”,则符合英语形合的表达习惯,常用非生物词作主语,句式多为复合长句,以主谓宾为核心,用各种短语或从句进行修饰、扩展,连接词的使用使句子的逻辑联系清晰。 例4 What I saw that day in Madrid wastame compared to what happened in Italy andBrazil when their two favoured teams wasshamefully defeated in early rounds.(Soccer’s Wild World Cup Scramble. College English ,Book 4)
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